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Saturday, June 7, 2014

Calling All Critiques: Submit your Query Letter or Book Blurb

Starting now, Calling All Critiques is accepting entries for your query letter or book blurb.

How to Enter

Submit your entry to Critiques@Saboviec.com. Cut and paste the following template into your email and fill it in.
Your name/pseudonym:
Your website (optional):
Title:

Genre (include audience, such as YA/Adult, and category):
Entry:
We’ve not assigned a limit to number of words in your entry.
Acceptance of entries closes on Monday, June 9, at 8 p.m. EDT.

More Details

Questions? Check out some of the earlier blog posts or leave a comment below:

After You Submit…

After you submit, check out all the participating blogs and bloggers:

Thanks for being part of Calling All Critiques!

Thursday, June 5, 2014

Edge of Tomorrow

Rated PG-13 / 1 hr 53 min / Action - Sci-Fi

What is it about?

Tom Cruise is a press consultant for the military. He helps to sell the war against the invading aliens. He is then told that he must cover the assault on the enemy from the front lines. When he refuses, he is labeled a deserter. He finds himself in handcuffs with the invasion force. He is forced to join them for the attack. The attack is a disaster. Cruise manages to kill one of the alpha aliens before he dies. The alien's blood gives him the power to reset the day, and he is able to come back to the same point in time when he dies. He uses this power to try to fight back.

You will like it if...

You like sci-fi action movies. The thought of the alien's blood giving Tom Cruise's character these fantastic powers is a bit rediculous. If you can get past that without having a stroke then the rest of the movie is quite entertaining. The special effects are well done. The aliens are speedy and lethal looking. Emily Blunt is a great choice for the female lead in the movie. She steals several scenes from Cruise. The ending is a bit predictable, but that doesn't ruin it. If you have any interest in seeing this movie I would recommend that you do.

Calling All Critiques: Week 2 Recap and Winners!

Thank you to everyone who has participated so far in Calling All Critiques, whether you were a submitting author or a critiquer or just stopped by the blogs to see what was going on. The second week’s Rafflecopter random giveaway of two eBooks and a $10 Amazon gift certificate ends on Sunday at midnight, so give some feedback on one of the earlier posts and maybe win some prizes:

First Week Visiting Winner

The first week’s visiting winner who either commented or followed one of the participating bloggers on Twitter is:
Entry #49
Elliot W.


Elliot, you should have received an email yesterday. You have until Thursday to respond with further information for us to send you your prize. If we don’t hear from you by then, a runner-up will be chosen.

Cover Art Random Winner

As a thank you to all the authors who submitted their work to be critiqued, we’ve randomly chosen one lucky winner who has a choice of the following prizes:




This week’s winner is:
Entrant #9
Bob Cradock


Bob, look for an email in your inbox later today. You have until Friday to respond as to which of the three prizes you want. If we don’t hear from you by then, a runner-up will be chosen. Once you choose your prize, we will provide you and the blogger with each other’s contact information to coordinate timing.

Next Week: Query Letter or Book Blurb Critique

Starting Saturday, June 7, 2014, at 6 a.m. Eastern and ending Monday, June 9, 2014, at 8 p.m. Eastern, submit your query letter or book blurb to Critiques@Saboviec.com. Cut and paste the following template into your email and fill it in.
The name you want to be known by:
Your website (optional):
Title:

Genre (include audience, such as YA/Adult, and category):
Entry:
We’re not imposing a word limit for this critique; however, you already know that too long isn’t going to get you an agent or interest in your novel, right?
This week’s deadline: Monday, June 9, 2014, at 8 p.m.
No changes for the rest of this from last week: Your entry will be assigned a number in the order in which it is received. Our cutoff is 30 entries. Entries 1-6 will be posted on our blogs Monday morning, entries 7-12 will be posted on our blogs Tuesday morning, etc.
Your email will be kept confidential. What you submit is what will be posted, so double- and triple-check your spelling and grammar. (We may correct crazy formatting errors as a result of email quirks, but still, make sure it’s clean before you press send.) You may resubmit an entry, but it goes to the end of the queue: if you submit it past the 30-entry cutoff, you’ll have lost your spot.
All 30 accepted entrants will be entered into the prize drawing, and the winner will be chosen by their assigned number through Random.org.
As always, if you don’t want both positive and negative feedback, please don’t enter. This event is for us to help one another grow as authors and maybe to make some friends in the process.
Some fine print: Entries that don’t include the above information will be discarded. At our sole discretion, we may also discard other posts for reasons such as offensive/distasteful material. Erotica may be confined only to certain blogs, and we may put an adult content warning on it.

If You Enter, Please …

Critique other entrants. The sky’s the limit on how many other entries you critique, but we ask that you at least provide feedback to two other participants.
Also, when you receive feedback on your entry, be gracious if you decide to respond. We would highly suggest not responding except for perhaps a “thank you,” but you’re going to do what you’re going to do, aren’t you? Don’t be defensive or explanatory; these critiques are for you to improve your writing. Take what you want and leave the rest behind.

And If You Critique, Please …

Be nice. Be constructive. Be specific. Be polite.
Mean-spirited or spam posts will be deleted. General “I love everything about it and I think you’re the next J.K. Rowling, ZOMG!” obviously-written-about-your-best-friend comments won’t be deleted, but that’s tacky. Don’t be tacky.

Join us for more fun next week!

While you wait, check out all the participating blogs and bloggers:

We look forward to seeing you back here soon.
Any questions? Leave them in the comments!

Monday, June 2, 2014

Finished and on Wattpad: These Are Not The Droids You're Looking For

These Are Not The Droids You Are Looking For

I finished this story last night, and thought you all might enjoy! This story is a bit on the silly side, but for those of you who follow me on twitter you already know that side of me.

Follow the misadventures of Bob and Doug. They are two of the Storm Troopers that have shown up sporadically throughout the original Star Wars trilogy. Their first appearance is in Episode 4, the original Star Wars, where they were assigned to look for R2-D2 and C3PO. At that point they encountered a young Luke Skywalker and Obi Wan Kenobi. That is when we are first introduced to the Jedi mind trick.

Chapter 1 - Mos Eisley

Calling All Critiques: In Shadows Waiting Cover Art - Entry #2

Thank you to everyone who has shared their cover art. We all love cover art! Hopefully our comments will be useful.

Also, please note that we still have spots open: Submit your cover art to Critiques@Saboviec.com for inclusion in this week’s blog posts. We need it by tonight at 8 p.m. if you want to be included tomorrow and spots are still open.

For critiquers, please feel free to enter our Rafflecopter giveaway. One lucky person will win a $10 Amazon gift card, an eCopy of It Ain’t Easy Being Jazzy by Quanie Miller, and an eCopy of Guarding Angel by S. L. Saboviec.

a Rafflecopter giveaway


There’s More to Critique!


After leaving your comments, don’t go yet! That is, if you have time, we cordially invite you to give more feedback on some of our other brave souls. Head on over to one or more of these blogs to see some more great entries:
Thanks again to everyone participating in this critique event!